Hikau poem I learned that short hikau poems are from japanese.
Ocean: Next time i should include abverbs.
5-powerful ocean
7-travel across salty sea
5-fishing for sealife.
Definition poem I learned that definition poem start with a quetion and it ends with a thats a.
What an ocean? Next time i should use adjective before nouns.
A place where people fish, dive and swim
Where sea animals live
Where tsunami happen
A place that haves vast and little waves
Where you van get salty water in your mouth.
By Rhiley
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