Divine watermelon!

Divine Watermelon!!

“Ahhh” The fresh sweet smell of watermelon,Mm mm mm the divine smell going through my nose this makes my morning it’s my favourite fruit. 3...2...1 “s-s-s-slirp munch crunch!!” my mouth slowly opens wide. Greedily i taste the disgusting white and black peeps (seeds).  I feel like it was going to be juicy but it wasn't, are we going to have more? The green disgusting/good rind part was all gone. Black pips looking like my dark black uniform nibbling nice fruit.

By Rhiley

This is my writing about my watermelon and also this is my drawing.

I enjoyed drawing my watermelon and eating it.

Next time I need to make my drawing darker so you can see better.